Pushed to the edge of despair
this rocky place offers no hope
fear lapping ankles around
against empty waters we grope
*
silent, though nothing is still
fear pounds loudly our hearts
no where have we left to hide
cold surrounds each, every part
*
though I stand here in a crowd
ice-cube tray we all huddle
so alone am I in this moment
shivering my blood froths til
it bubbles
*
the predator, dark he has come
my bones weaken and shudder
they know but their glance faints away
no consolation have we left to utter
*
past this place my eyes strain to gaze
beyond, bare feet rub raw
our ancestors’ bones all the same
torn clean, foul consuming claw
*
child’s distant cry distills thoughts
though sanguine I have become
what courage there once was
I offer myself that you might run
*
slowly the creature now circles
selection part of its way
it has broken much in its jaws
I offer to be its next prey
*
Large “It” opens like a cave
stalactite are its teeth that rake
dripping with frosty blood
putrid tunnel offers no escape
*
will memory mine be but a creature belch
bravery had run out its course
screaming meets my ears
my own that have now been scorched
*
I am but an appetizer
“flee” last words from my lips
“before you become the main meal”
metered crunching I hear as it rips
*
how quiet are the skulls
resting as stones a score
laying once living and free
no more on this cavernous floor
~ Leslie Moon
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Lyrical yet menacing, Leslie. I especially enjoyed the last stanza, which seemed almost peaceful after what came before.
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Thanks I was thinking how Shakespeare can wield some lovely dark contrasts. This really was a fun one that “flowed” together on the page :).
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Beautiful, Leslie. Like Thomas, I like how the last stanza ends the piece in a calming tone. Very well done.
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Thanks Craig for your input and your stopping by to read this Tuesday Pen of the Damned “Snack.”
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Indeed the last stanza brings calmness to end the poem…another fine write.
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Thanks Charlie for your visit and your comment
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Calm before the storm…
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Lovely poem, moondustwriter. My favorite stanza is:
I am but an appetizer
“flee” last words from my lips
“before you become the main meal”
metered crunching I hear as it rips
Self sacrifice at its best! Great job.
Blaze
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Someone’s gotta be lunch 🙂
Thanks Blaze
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I like your thinking, moondustwriter! 😀
Blaze
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hi Leslie, I really enjoyed this haunting poem, great rhythm and pace and evocative imagery. love the line “..how quiet are the skulls / resting as stones a score”
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glad you felt the haunt (past and present) glad you are part of this damned bunch MN
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an unusual feast of the beast.
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I’m on an unusual roll with food groups 🙂
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I’ll never look at a glass of milk the same again especially the frothy kind 🙂
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Drink deep, drink horror…
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very visual poem. “Fear lapping ankles around”
A fine chill in this milk.
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Glad you felt the chill…
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“how quiet are the skulls” Alas I know not… the “crunching” sound disturbs…,What an fear evoking write!!
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I guess it’s not the skulls making all that racket 🙂
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I love your use of poetry to tell a chilling tale. This one is bouncing about my head trying to escape.
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Thanks Dani. Poetry allows for the imagination to fill in the vacant spaces (in the skull’s eye sockets). Golly I’ve been hanging with these Damned folks too long 🙂
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…and the cereal’s still crunchy 🙂
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Someone’s hungry… (apparently)
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Excellent, excellent, excellent, Leslie!! 🙂 Every element of your poem works perfectly here; no word is wasted! Mirroring several earlier comments, your last stanza binds everything together brilliantly! I want more milk!!! (never thought I’d hear myself say such a thing lol)
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Thanks Joseph. As a fledgling horror writer, I always appreciate the feedback.
The milk is souring quite nicely for my next poem in a Chalice…
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Very nicely done, Leslie! An excellent poem that tells a dark tale. Superb! 🙂
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Thanks Nina I always appreciate your editorial touches that finish each piece.
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snack times are always fun times…. 😉
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Yep a wolf would know. Thanks Tony 🙂
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