Damnlings, welcome yet again to our lair of insanity where our depraved souls leak their nectar for your consumption…
In the collection of prose set forth before you, you will find each of the authors has been constrained to a measure between one hundred and one hundred fifty words; two of which must be borrowed from the nether’s uttering. But fear not, for the Damned wear our shackles well and true – we shrink from no challenge. Sit, read, perhaps ponder… which two of the five words on offer would you chose for a story worthy of the ink that drips from the Pen of the Damned?
Not His Own
The Dark One will be happy with this offering. It lies at my feet, struggling for breath – this man of valor. Sadly for him, no one will remember his name; only his actions. His hands, which under my power killed so many, now claw uselessly at the blood soaked earth. Staring into the sky, his eyes begin to glaze over. It is always closest to death that I can be seen. There is a hint of fear in his dulling orbs as he spots me, then a dawning realization that his actions were not wholly his own. In one quick swoop, I reach into his chest, tear out his soul. This will do nicely. Moving on, I look around the battlefield for the next of His children to inhabit.
Amshu and Nerezza
Lee A. Forman
“Why don’t you leave?”
“Why should I?”
“To inhabit a body for too long is dangerous.”
“Don’t you think I’m aware of that?”
“So why do you stay?”
“Why do you?”
Silence grew, both between life and something that wasn’t quite death—an eternal state of non-corporeal existence.
Nerezza grunted and folded both arms across a bare chest. “I came here first.”
“So shouldn’t you be the first to leave?” Amshu raised an eyebrow.
A smile split the coal expression on Nerezza’s face. “No.”
“Why is that?”
“Darkness is absolute. Light fades.”
“So stay here forever.”
“Maybe I will.”
“Quiet! The child awakens!”
With a groan it rubbed its eyes and sat up. It turned its head left and right, looking for the things born in its nightmares.
“Shall we flip a coin?”
“Don’t we always?” Amshu lowered both eyelids with boredom.
“Heads he lives, tails he dies.”
Joseph A. Pinto
They dug in, their bones, their charred, brittle bones, hacking the dirt with their spades.
Private McDermott watched as the cadaver platoon fortified their position within the trench. His Sergeant had notified him help would be arriving, but this…? A shell exploded nearby, and his sense of valor nearly fled. He buckled his helmet beneath his chin and dropped into the ditch.
The cadavers worked without sound, just earth and burnt stone grinding within their joints. Flesh, like tattered curtains, hung from their frames. Foul, heinous things, McDermott had to remind himself these devil-spawns fought on their side now.
A cadaver leered, each socket a hellish foxhole in its own right. McDermott recognized its prominent jaw line—Jimmy James. Together they had seen basic training through.
Now McDermott wondered what was worse—the screaming Nazi mortars or the chattering of hungry teeth inside those damned Allied skulls?
Veronica Magenta Nero
The air that seeps in from outside is foul, it is tainted with hope, with sentiments of love. Outside there is a world of false promises and pretty lies. The truth is here, in this dark tomb we inhabit. We were sealed in here long ago. The passing of time has become meaningless, I don’t know how old I am anymore. I remember my mothers’ screams as she punched and clawed at the heavy doors. Those sobs and screams, they still echo within these walls. Perhaps my mother is dead but yet she moves. She passes through the walls at night and she returns to feed me in the morning. Warm blood pours from her mouth into mine. Her eyes glitter, they are the only light I ever see. Soon, her eyes seem to say, soon it will be time to leave.
A ripe smell washed over the docks; the sickly aroma of decay. For two hours Mark patrolled the boards, the scattered stores, the shipyard and the steel skeleton of RMS Bravery, chained to the ceilings and the walls. The smell was stronger here; he ducked beneath vast iron ribs, inspected rows of sheet metal, kicked at the crabs who had come to inhabit the dank spaces between these things: nothing.
It was almost midnight when the ship parted the mists. She moved silently, her savage plow cutting clean through the waves. She brought with her the smell. Sitting at his desk, Mark gagged, dropped his pen, did a double-take when her name slid into view: RMS Valor, one year lost to the ocean bed, still wreathed in slime, deck crawling with the lobster-limbs of her new monster crew.
Dust motes floated through the stale air like pallid balloons on a lifeless breeze. Everything had been undisturbed for far too long. How could one such as he, born of noble blood and ancient valor, stoop to inhabit such a foul and loathsome place? Dmitri bowed his head and pressed forward. His father should have reposed in the Vvedenskoye crypt in Moscow with the rest of his kin.
Dmitri passed through the room without disturbing the dust-covered floors. The cement lid to the tomb lie broken on the floor. He was too late. He smelled the wood of the steak before he saw it. The undead wither and become undone rather than die, and what had been his father lie within the tomb. Dmitri picked up the steak, smelled it, and knew where to take his revenge.
Those That Make The Rules
Surrounded by blood and spoiled dreams, I surveyed the land. The ground squirmed with the dying youth—drafted teenagers ripped apart by merciless gears of the war machine. I watched as they clutched at their gore and twitched in agony. The world’s future facing a painful lack thereof simply because they were told to by those that make the rules. What a fucking joke! Foul logic cooked up and served in heaping mouthfuls to kids too blinded by their own testosterone and sense of rebellion to see the truth of it all. Their blood dripped from my fingers. Their last cries echoed in my ears. I survived. I killed under orders in what they deemed efforts of valor. Slaughter, something that would be utterly horrific at home on the suburban cul-de-sacs, was called valiant. Now, I see the cogs in the machine and I will kill for them no more.
Christopher A. Liccardi
“Valor above all else,” he repeated to himself. The knife plunged deep into his gut was unnoticed. Those who inhabit the dark places often find comfort in such noble monikers but this one was different. He perverted the valorous, the brave, with his hate. The last hero lay at his feet, panting as much from fear as exhaustion. He wore the triumphant grin of those who think that killing a single person can thwart evil.
“That blade was dipped in poison, you bastard,” the hero panted. Blood and spittle flew from the corners of his mouth. “Tonight, you die with us.”
Named after his father for more than his looks, Samael’s grin widened as he collapsed to the ground knowing two more would take his place. Two more would pick up where he left off and valor would die along with the last hero.
A Few Steps
The ripe stench sickens; the fetid odor enough to raise the bile of the staunchest bastard, yet here is the place I was born – brought into this world of evils and misdeeds. This cracked, filthy slab of concrete served as both my crib and cradle. Did I ask for this life? No. But granted to me, or shall I say more accurately, thrust upon me, it certainly was. I’ve not shied from the mantle presented; I’ve embraced it and its repugnance with the whole of my being. The squalor within which I exist, the distance from this darkened stoop to the brilliance just beyond has never been a burden for my soul to bear. Though when the gates swing wide, and the light blinds these most dim of eyes, I cannot but wonder if another destiny may have awaited me had she held her birthing fluids a few steps farther…
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16 thoughts on “Damned Echoes 2”
Brilliant collection of interesting tales. Dying Breath is my fave….brilliantly written – I have already formed a whole novel from it in my mind. For me – it has a bit of a retro historical style to it that I love.
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Another great collection! As always, I enjoyed reading each individual take on the prompt. Damned fine prose, fiends! 🙂
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Thank you for more wonderful shorts from Pen of The Damned
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Lovely titbits from my fav penofthedamned.com
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Well my darling damnedlings, once again you have be challenged and risen to it with a mighty force of twisted delights! I have enjoyed reading this from my bath , and this will be are bed time story tonight, as the wonder that is our crazy frog is working hard, so I will be back to let you know what my lovely little freaky friends think in a short while! Awdw!
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Yet again, I am proud to be part of such a talented group. Great take on the prompts from all of the #damned! I don’t think I can pick a favorite out of the lot. Well done!
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From the girls! Yay the damned did it again! Brill writing , great uses of words and spine chillingly stories ! Jazzy ask, do you ever want to take these shorts further and develop them in to a full story? Well night night damnlings , from the 6 in this bed! (Well in the living room cis we ran out of room in bed and the tv works better down here!)
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Damn amazing stories! Loved every one of them.
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I really enjoyed this group of fantastically composed shorts. The Damned have quite a collection of muses.
Always a fan of these. I’m really glad we get the chance to write two flash pieces each rotation! I love seeing everyone’s interpretations of the same image/word(s).
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Awesome…and awesome. There, I’ve picked my two words! lol Each of these pieces sing from the darkness!
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Marvellous, as always, Damned. These exercises are awesome!
These collections always leave me speechless. Such talented works and fantastic takes on the same source material/words. These group posts are like an incredible mind’s eye version of a Tales From The Crypt episode. Simply awesome! Proud to be Damned!