Pointed Ends

“9-1-1? I am calling about three, maybe four people who have been abducted. I can tell you where they are.”

“Let me get your name, number you are calling from and location.”

“Oh okay.” I tried to take large gulps of air to still the panic. “It’s my daughter. They…he took her. One of them had a gun at my head.” I trembled as I remembered cold metal pressed against my temple.

“Ma’am calmly give me your name, your number, the closest address.” I could sense rising impatience in the operator.

“Address? I dont’ know. I’m in the part of the psychiatric facility that’s under renovation. Does the address matter? Some of the buildings are unstable. That bastard is putting my child in harm’s way. I’m her mom. She would be a famous actress if he would let her live. There’s no number on this plastic hull of a land line. I killed him, I think.  The man who held a gun to my head. I always carry a knife…I work night shift.  I’m not sure if the blood is mine or his. Get a damned squad car here now!” I threw the receiver; it ricocheted off the wall.

Great, now they will wonder who the psycho is, I chastised myself.

“No!” I heard her familiar scream. But this was no stage scream; there was too much blood curdling. Running in the direction of her voice, I gave up any hope that the police or paramedics could make it in time.

I saw his face. He was so placid and had such a kind smile when we had him on psychotropics. I told my colleague that it was too bad he couldn’t stay in a permanent, happy drugged state.  “That could adversely affect recovery,” came his reply.

“Who is being adversely affected now?” I shook my fist at a blank hollow window.

I heard vibrations, then the recognizable sound of shattering glass.

“The building is going to cave in before help arrives.” I looked toward the empty shadows behind which were the monsters of my past and present. Focus, they can’t hurt you unless you allow them access. FOCUS!

Taking assessment of my situation, I knew that time was against me. What resources do I have that this madman does not?

Drugs.  I had lots of drugs in the double locked cabinet just outside my office. “There’s no one to help me check them out on the RAND.” My medical bearing was trying to take hold. “Screw regulations. This guy is going to kill people.”

I hurled myself loudly up the stairs, never thinking about stealth.

I had to fiddle with the combination three times before I was steady enough to catch the combination;  I pulled the key from around my neck.

Click

CLICK

There was the man with the kind smile. With him was my estranged husband, my ‘almost famous’ daughter, and her friend (my husband’s current lover.)

“We pulled off quite the performance. Ehm mother? Too bad you’ll never see me on Broadway!”

I felt a painful jab in my arm. “Don’t worry darling, this will calm you down.” Even though I had been married to him, I had never liked his smile.

******

Lost, liquidy blue eyes looked at the attending doctor who had once been her (my) colleague.

“Why did you go killing that innocent man, locking your family and friends up, and misleading the authorities? They are only waylaying the electric chair because I have them convinced that you are crazy and have been going crazy for some time. I had to add stuff into your personnel files. Think of all the trouble I could get into.” A smile rose in his eyes.

“Thank you” spilled over lips as drool pooled about her (my) chin.

******

“It would have been enough to buy the role I needed to set my fame in stone.”

“It should have paid off my debts and given me a comfy retirement.”

“I’m just a blood-sucking bimbo with nothing more than I started with.” The girl pouted and shrugged her shoulders.

“She should have gotten the chair,” the man smiled broadly.  “Who could have predicted a psychiatric break? Well I’ll have to do without my cut of the inheritance. Too bad for all of you. You have less now than when you were skimming a sizable lot off her salary. She really does have beautiful eyes.”

******

He shook the paper to dry (my signature was still fresh) before he slid his release from the facility into his medical records.

I smiled knowing he had my key; it’s the least I could do. I realized some monsters should be allowed to roam free.

~ Leslie Moon

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About moondustwriter

Writing is one of my passions. I am a published christian author, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, ministries. I am an advocate for the arts and the special needs community - my passions lie there as well. There are many facets to the moon thanks for gazing in the night sky. If you are on twitter I am @moondustwriter

31 responses to “Pointed Ends”

  1. jonolsonauthor says :

    Reblogged this on and commented:
    POINTED ENDS by Pen of the Damned’s Leslie Moon

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  2. Craig McGray says :

    Reblogged this on From Bright Minds Come Dark Things and commented:
    POINTED ENDS by the Damned Leslie Moon

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  3. blazemcrob says :

    Holy crap, moondustwriter! Chilling tale. This back and forth banter of insanity holds nothing back as faces and voices weave their special touch to what lies inside unstable evil minds.

    Blaze

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    • moondustwriter says :

      I don’t know what has me in a health and horror mindset (maybe it’s taking CEUs for my nursing license). It is kinda fun to play around the edges of sanity

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      • blazemcrob says :

        Playing around the edges is always fun, Leslie. I think with psychiatry there are no blacks and whites. Only shades of gray. And the shades can darken in a flash.

        Blaze

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  4. Magenta Nero says :

    what an intense ride, Leslie! I loved the way you juggled multiple points of view. Great story, I very much enjoyed it.

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  5. Danimiller says :

    Many pointed and loose ends in this short story.

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  6. knightsheart says :

    Wow! Leslie, Great Gaslight twist at the end!

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  7. ladysknight says :

    Hmmm
    Guess there are monsters in every corner or is it psychos???

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  8. theowllady says :

    Loved this story!
    Reblogged. @v@ ❤

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  9. Thomas Brown says :

    Twists and turns in this ‘delusional’ prose, Leslie, a shattered psyche brought to life through the words on the page!

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  10. Joseph Pinto says :

    Loved your story this week, Leslie! Thom stole my thunder (damn you, Thom! lol) that your tale is a diabolically devious ride of twists and turns. Great twist at the end; it was fun to read your mind come unraveled in this one 😉

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  11. weshootcrime says :

    Love the criminal mind – a real monster…

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  12. Nina D'Arcangela says :

    Very diabolical, Leslie! This little baby has more twists and turns than France has back-alleys. I like the way you split the piece apart – very clever!! Kudos, one who writes in the moondust! 🙂

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  13. zkullis says :

    Ah, Leslie, this was a fantastic piece that pulled me one way and then another like a macabre tennis match. Very well done!

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