Ahhh Damnlings, into our realm of darkness you have wandered once more. A realm where words twist on the wind, and morals gain no purchase…
In the collection of prose set forth before you, you will find each of the authors has been constrained to a measure of one hundred to one hundred fifty words; two of which must be borrowed from the nether’s uttering. But fear not, for the Damned wear our shackles well and true – we shrink from no challenge. Sit, read, perhaps ponder… which two of the five words on offer would you chose to sacrifice for a story worthy of the ink that drips from the Pen of the Damned?
Why a sacrifice? You will never hear them Echoed again!
My Mind Screams
My old fishing boat, the Extant, rocks unsteady beneath my feet. I struggle to catch my breath — difficult after stealing something else’s last. Blood runs down the wrench in my hand, dropping off onto the floor already wet from the carcass curled against the wall. Even in the dim cabin light, I am repulsed by this abomination of nature; the unnatural pulled up from the depths in my fishing net. Its skin glistens, almost amphibious, but completely alien. Somewhere in the mass of flesh, bone and gore are its eyes; black, unemotional and lifeless. My mind screams, unable to comprehend the events that transpired. Grabbing a spare gas can, I douse the body. With a flick of my lighter, the ungodly is engulfed – burning its existence from my mind.
Lee A. Forman
Bound to a chair in the center of a dark room I sit. Countless eyes stare, their yellow glow peering through thin slits in the ebony veil which encircles me. Hope of escape—fleeting, lost; I try to focus on the steady drip of rainwater from the ceiling, the only thing keeping me extant.
They blink in the hushed air, each subtle movement accompanied by a soft squish—a sound not human. I don’t know what beasts hide in the shadowy corners of this strange and unfamiliar chamber. I have yet to see them. Even their shape is a mystery.
Only thing I am aware of is their hunger. They reek of it. I don’t know how long it will be until they tear into me and begin to feast. But from the stench of their breath, I know it will be soon.
“….. no interim procedure for eradicating ……”
Dr. Livingston’s eyes glided numbly over the words. She liked simplicity, and this pretentious document could have been reduced to a few sentences. The cell-repairing microbes they created to combat the aging process mutated shortly after they were introduced to the general population. The Guardian Strain became a pandemic.
She looked at her bloody hands. As with millions of other infected, the cellular walls of her organs bloated with the infection, swelling with puss and blood before splitting open like roadkill in the heat.
Dr. Livingston touched the package her colleague sent, her sausage-like fingers leaving a trail of smelly ichor across the box. The blood-stained note was written in shaky handwriting.
Her trembling hand reached up and placed the only cure into her mouth. Ironically, the treatment did in fact come from a shot, she thought as she squeezed the trigger.
“There. You see it, now? You see?”
Indeed, I did. One of only two extant copies known to man. There it lay beneath the glass. “How did you gain such a—”
He waved me off. “Does it matter?” sucking on his Gurkha Black Dragon, appreciating the white tendrils curling round the cigar’s tip. “What matters is that I have it. What matters is that it can be yours…if you’ve acquired its cost.”
“I have.” I knew my associate’s fondness for cigars. I knew his affinity for a virgin’s eyes even more. I handed over my satchel, his fee exquisitely stored inside. He parted his mouth; the peppery finish of his cigar wafted, tickling my nose. Then he pitched forward, the strain I had swabbed along his cigar’s head seizing his heart.
I took my priceless manuscript. I took back the sightless eyes.
I left him to his cigar.
I noticed the church while driving through drab countryside. I pulled over to look around. I was surprised by the age of the building, the yellow sandstone was coated with moss, crumbling grey headstones littered the churchyard. The wooden doors were locked but I managed to wrench them open. Dim light shone through the small stained glass windows, the air was thick with dust. Slowly I walked the aisle, glancing around as my eyes adjusted. I froze suddenly, spotting the draped figure that stood before the altar. It wore a long dress with a tattered train of ghostly lace. I heard the sound of faint sobbing. It turned towards me. With hands of blackened skin it lifted its veil and fixed me with a rotten stare. The wailing began and I fell to my knees, struck by the bitter heartbreak only the dead can know.
I tried to tell him. My words started in a hasty shout, the syllables tripping over themselves as I shoved them past my chapped lips. It sounded all wrong. I couldn’t even recognize the words myself. Lack of water in these scorched days has left my mouth and throat so damned dry. With precious little time at hand, I strain, trying again, forcing my tacky tongue to dislodge and shape the sounds, yet it only rolls and twitches like a dying slug. The cold lightening of panic surges through me, lifting my heavy eyelids, raising my outstretched hands, but nothing can stop the downward arc of his weapon. The massive wrench is the last thing I see—stealing my sight on the first catastrophic blow. Warm blood wets my throat just enough for my plea to gain sound as everything fades to eternal darkness, “Not a Zombie”.
On the last day of summer, the dead rose from their rest in the earth. He watched from his treehouse while they emerged. Thin bone. Domed skulls. Clenched hands unfurling like flowers in the morning.
There was nothing hurried about their efforts. They staggered to their feet, stretched, shed old skin and loose soil. When his Action Man fell to the floorboards, he imagined he could hear the creak of their necks as they stared skyward.
It took them hours to climb the tree. Fingers without tips wrenched slugs of grey bark. He watched them until he couldn’t bear to watch them anymore then dragged himself and a blanket into the corner.
It was dark when they finally reached him. She had on a veil; black, backlit with luminescent eyes. Even as she crawled closer, he wondered where his parents were, and when they were going to rescue him.
Christopher A. Liccardi
In its extant, this was nothing new. It was strong though. It hadn’t been seen in ages not because it was weak, but because it was fast. This strain moved quicker than anything else they had ever seen.
“What are we going to do, Doctor Lee?”
Lee, an experienced viral biologist crushed what would probably be his final cigarette and stared though the haze of blue smoke. A pause…
“First, we die Janine. Then, we come back.”
“I don’t want to come back.”
“Actually, it’s as perfect as you could ever be. Complete harmony between the living and the dead. You’d be not alive, and yet mortally perfect. Besides, you don’t have much of a choice.”
“Do we have to drop it on the city?” Her voice quavered the slightest bit.
“We do but it won’t matter where you are in a few hours.”
Like the maelstrom that swept in her tide, she swirled with a tempest of fate. Those before her attempted to flee; begged forgiveness for their evils. Misunderstood lives, unappreciated deeds, this lot unaware the veil had thinned solely to allow their pardon. Gleaming ebony skin that smoldered of embers left to flame, she bore down upon them with brutality unknown to these worthy heathens. Necks twisted most unnatural, bodies rent of their companion cog and spokes, these children of misdirection now granted reward for actions unprovoked yet savored by that which waits. As claws struck and teeth ripped, screams wailed the song of souls unburdened. Mother to the immoral, sister of the dishonest, beacon for the misguided, she stilled as the slop of her task struck a final note. More would come, born of those who kneel in perverse fealty. In the interim, the void of silence stirred her home.
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24 thoughts on “Damned Echoes”
Well and truly done, to all those of the #Damned! What a great challenge it was and how they have all risen to meet it, clawing and gnashing to subdue such as these words! Blood-soaked gore to you all!
Another terrific collection of flash prose with a wide scope of concepts and voices. I genuinely enjoyed all of them! 🙂
Great stories one and all! But, what else should I expect from The Damned? 😀
Thank you, Blaze!! High praise coming from the man on fire! 😉 xoxo
Praise well deserved, Nina! 😀
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You are too kind, Sir! Tons of hugs!! 😀
Hell yeah my friends!! What a gnarly group of reads!
Enjoyed them thoroughly
I believe our first Damned Echoes was a success! I really enjoyed reading everyone’s prose! The words chosen and the routes taken made for a unique experience in each piece. I bow my head to the Damned! 🙂
daor pinn an peann mighty an damanta ! go raibh maith agat as an seachtain offerring twisted ! i am i ndáiríre tinn , ar meds iv agus tá cannula i mo gcalafort don 2 seachtaine seo chugainn , ar a laghad . ( Gan mothú leithscéal as féin , a chuid go léir den saol dom ) seo cheered ar bhean dubh hÉireann tinn ceart suas ! go raibh maith agat as mo chroí dubh agus twisted ! Awdw X
If I could read this, I’d probably say thank you! lol 😉
Hail to the pens the mighty pen of the damned ! thanks for this weeks twisted offering! i am really sick , on meds iv and a cannula in my port for the next 2 weeks , at least . ( Without feeling sorry for himself , it’s just life) Cheered this Iriish right up ! thank you from my black and twisted heart ! Awdw X I forget you guys don’t do Irish! 😉
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Thank you Angel, as always your praise is greedily accepted!! I hope you’re feeling better soon… hugs to you! xo
Feeling a lot better, but have no voice what so ever! Being a very Bobby madam , means the house in is very quite! Although if I start laughing I do a great line in ‘which’s cackles’ ! X
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Awesome effort, I really enjoyed them all. I love the diversity of Damned horrors we conjured up.
Everyone stepped up to the plate and knocked it out of the park with their piece! This was a fun change up and am definitely looking forward to more! Great job guys!
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This is marvellous! It’s always a pleasure to dip into your dark imaginations. Every story has its Damned charm. More of these!
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DAMNED ECHOES by Pen of the Damned
Excellent everyone, fantastic stories.
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100 words each of pure terror. from penofthedamned.com
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Pen of the Damned’s first word-prompt group challenge!
Great shackled verse and as good as it gets yea damned ones. So great to see some new blood dripping here.
Hugs or do I have to leave claw marks??