It was a dark night, full of clouds and shadows. Whispers carried on the wind, racing through the forest and brushing the trees. The monotonous chanting of a hundred voices lingered on the air.
A proud look, a lying tongue, and hands that shed innocent blood. . .
A figure hurried along the winding forest path. Overhead, the clouds shifted so that the moon emerged just as the figure did from the tree line. The forest was illuminated, a picture of viridian mist and boughs. Even the lake glittered under its glare.
A heart that deviseth wicked imaginations, feet that be swift in running to mischief. . .
The figure ran on, its hands slipping from beneath its sleeves and revealed for a moment in the moonlight. They were slick with wetness and black as the figure’s habit, which fluttered furiously as it ran.
A false witness that speaketh lies, and he that soweth discord among brethren. . .
A long shadow stretched across the lake. Offset by the moon, an abbey rose into the night, its bell-tower cutting into the sky.
“I must not tell lies,” muttered the figure. Reaching the lakeside, he started across a walkway.
“I must not tell lies.” The raps of the knocker, when he reached the doors, rang leaden into the night. It was several minutes before they opened a crack, the wind rushing instantly inside.
“Please, let me in.”
“We do not take to strangers in these parts.”
“Please, some charity.” The words seemed to have a strange effect on the doorman, the sliver of his face illuminated in a flash of lightning. “I am a man of God, like you.”
“There are no men of God. Not here, not anywhere.”
The door widened nevertheless and the tiny figure slipped inside.
The dining hall was empty. An air of reverence hung about the room, thick like incense or a guilty conscience. Dust coated the armaments and windows, visible as tiny motes in the flashes of lightning. Sin burst into unholy life with every jagged crack, their monstrous forms depicted in the stained glass of the windows
“I was caught unawares, travelling from Glastonbury. The weather fell foul, but we thought we could endure it. We took shelter, set up camp. . . We were wrong.”
“You were caught abroad?”
“By more than God’s rain. It was no ordinary storm but a Sin, come to claim us. Wrath, in all her vitriolic glory. We died. I ran. And now I am here.”
A startled gasp. “They chase your heels? You brought them here?”
“I lost them. I fled into the woods while they stayed to tear at the corpses. . .” The monk began to shake again, his hands rattling against the sturdy wooden table top. Cutlery clattered, the quiet sound reverberating within the heights of the dining hall. “My God, I still have their blood under my nails. . .”
“Robin,” said the newcomer. “Brother Robin.”
“You will be safe here, Brother. I am Brother William and, for tonight, all that we have is yours.”
The room might have been magnificent, once. Figures decorated the ceiling with beautiful intricacy; depictions from The Book of Sin brought to life in vivid brush-stroke. Above the flickering candlelight, the painting seemed almost to move, a trick of light and Robin’s own heightened imagination, as if the Sins were in the very act of being banished from the world by God and His children. Except, of course, no such thing had ever happened, nor ever would, not so long as men were men.
Both men tucked into their food. Robin ate voraciously, as though afraid his plate might be taken unfinished from before him. The chanting continued; a hallowed, reverential hymn hanging like the dust in the air, and something else. The patter of claws, or tiny feet, skittering through the walls.
“Rats,” muttered William.
“You said earlier that there are no men of God? These do not sound like the words of a man in His service.” Robin peered across at the monk, who twitched but made no move to reply, raising instead a skewered sliver of meat to his mouth. It glistened, pink and bloody, reminding Robin of his own hands. He lowered them self-consciously beneath the table.
“Come,” said William suddenly. Spittle and ham flew from his lips.
“Where are we going?”
“You may be alone, but here we’re many. You must meet the others, before you retire. The Abbot is leading them in prayer.”
The two figures slipped noiselessly through the passages of the abbey. All about them, the hymn hung heavy on the air. They passed through great halls, their footsteps echoing on the cracked flagstone floors. Archways towered over them, engraved with signs of the cross, and every corridor was dimly lit with tiny candles. They wavered and danced, like the dying light in a man’s eyes, as the two monks ghosted past.
“I’ve never seen such architecture. I must admit, I’m somewhat in awe.” The two passed a statue, the edifice staring down at them righteously from its pedestal. An engraving beneath said St. George, who Robin remembered well as being the military saint responsible for casting back one of the Seven.
Outside, black clouds amassed in the night sky. Robin could see them as William and he strode through the cloisters towards the church, the monastic heart of the abbey. The church reared up before them. Windows watched them, more Sins staring monstrously at their approach. Then they were passing through the church’s doors and into the building proper.
Reverent song prickled at the back of Robin’s neck. It was holy, sanctimonious, resonating within his bones as if he’d been struck by one of the very bolts that danced through the night sky. Goosebumps ran the length of his robed arms.
“The hymn. . .”
From beside him, William nodded. “I know. I know.”
The church was humbler than the rest of the abbey but no less beautiful. Rows of benches led up to a dais at the front, atop which three small altars could be found. The place was old, as old as anything of the abbey Robin had already seen, but lacked the dust and decay that he had so far grown accustomed to. The church looked attended to. Cared for. Perfect, in every way.
At each row of benches stood a dozen monks, their backs turned, hoods covering their heads so that only their voices could be heard. More stood at the front on the raised platform, and at the pulpit a lonely figure: the Abbot himself, leading his congregation in solemn song.
“I recognise the hymn,” whispered Robin.
“They sing for God and to ward off evil. To ward off the Sins, in all their guises.”
“Such a thing is not possible, you realise.”
“We do our best, given the times.”
Robin’s eyes flashed with the lightning. ‘There are no men of God. Not here, not anywhere.”
William hung his head. He looked tired, suddenly. A hundred years old. “Perhaps I spoke rashly, before. Certainly I regret those sentiments. There are many on God’s earth who would. . . well, who would kill to be so close to Him, if you will excuse the expression.”
“You’d say they envy you?”
“And in doing so, they would sin.”
William glanced back at Robin, a stranger, at the heart of their abbey. His hair was still drenched, although it had been well over an hour since he’d been admitted past their walls. The blood of his comrades was no less slick about his hands. Surely it should have dried by now? Surely he should have wanted to wash?
“Forgive me, Brother, I forget; to which order did you say you belonged?”
“I did not, merely that I was travelling from Glastonbury.”
“Ah, I assumed. . .”
“Indeed. You know, it really is an abbey above all others that you have here. Beautiful. God would be proud.”
“Pride, Brother, is a sin like all others.”
“Envious of you, then, to live in such luxury.”
Something was happening to Robin. His waterlogged hair was lengthening before William’s eyes. A pallor overcame his flesh, such that he looked more like a statue or – God forbid – a corpse, than a living, breathing man. The blood began running like dirty water from his hands, two puddles growing around the monk’s habit .
“What’s happening? What trickery is this?”
“I have enjoyed your company, Brother, so much so in fact that I’ve decided I would quite like to be you.”
Time slowed, everything illuminated in a single flash of lightning. Robin span on his heel, habit fluttering like the wings of a bat as he descended on William. Hands closed around the monk’s neck, even as William plunged a knife into Robin’s shoulder. The iron blade slid smoothly and without resistance into skin and bone alike, and Robin shrieked obscenely. Bladeless, his weapon buried to the hilt, William dropped to the floor. Bloody handprints circled his bruised throat.
“Sin!” he screamed. “Brothers, Sin! See how the iron burns its flesh!”
The assembled monks did not rise to his aid. They did not fly in defence of their abbey. They did not move but continued to sing, their monotonous moans carrying far into the night.
“It is always dark, where I come from. There is no light. No warmth. We have no birdsong, save the screams of the crows. The screaming. They do not stop screaming.”
Scrabbling away, William backed against a statue. He felt alone. Trapped. But the statue brought him comfort. It was another of St. George; tall, defiant, clutching an ancient sword in its hands.
“You will always find screaming. This abbey is no different. Can you not hear the wind, Beast, as it races through the woods? It screams to feel, to touch. The dying, they scream as their lives are extinguished. The living scream when theirs are not. God’s earth is a chorus of cries.”
“Poetic,” hissed Robin, haggard, the knife still steaming in his shoulder. “I like you even more.”
William wrenched the sword from the statue. It came free with a lurch, sent him spinning, the blade careering towards Robin’s twisted face. He swung it with all his might, a prayer to the Lord on his lips.
A stony hand grabbed his chest from behind. It held him still even as another punched into his back. His vision failing, William had just enough time to look down, to see his bloody heart in its fingers, before he slumped to the church floor.
Giggling obscenely, St. George sprang into the air. Two glassy wings burst from its back as it took flight, twitching and euphoric into the rafters. Its skin rippled like liquid shadow.
Robin watched his child as it flew. “Silly monk,” he shrieked, casting off his own glamour. Slick hair cascaded from her head, clinging to the infantile body beneath. Pale flesh glinted wetly in the candlelight and two shards of broken emerald shone where there should have been eyes.
Envy plucked the steaming dagger from her shoulder. Black blood spat from the wound, not unlike that of the congregation’s, murdered earlier by her hands. Not that it had stopped them singing, of course. She did so enjoy their singing.
“Silly, silly monk.”
Movement, in the shadows. Shapes ghosted in and out of the darkness, flitting between this world and another. Faint shrieks and triumphant barks joined the unending hymn. Envy watched the unholy procession with a wicked grin; the flutter of crow wings, the clicking of bones, screams of malediction and joy alike filling the despoiled church. Scuttling down the aisle like a spidery spinster, she sprang atop the central altar.
“And now, Lesson One,” she crooned, her voice cracked, sing-song. “Lesson One. Lesson One. . . We must not tell lies.”
~ Thomas Brown
© Copyright 2016 Thomas Brown. All Rights Reserved.
25 thoughts on “The Abbey”
A subtle, yet exquisite story of the Sins come to life, Thomas! Beautifully descriptive. A very quiet lull to a rather rapacious ending. I genuinely enjoyed reading as the piece transitioned from the humble and subtle nuances of false claims to the echoes of Envy’s greed as it rumbled through the church of the Abbey!
Thanks, Nina! This one was a challenge to get in the word count. Glad you enjoyed!
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You did such a great job creating the atmosphere and the scene, it is so vivid and visceral. Very skillfull Thomas, I loved this.
My pleasure, Magenta!
Loved this, the writing flows and descriptions are wonderful.
Thank you for reading and commenting, adeleulnais. I’m really glad you enjoyed the read.
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my pleasure 🙂
Amazing atmosphere and visuals! The end was visceral and totally unexpected, which I enjoyed greatly. I tip my hat to you, sir!
Thanks, Lee! No hat-tipping necessary! Thank you for reading.
Wondrous story, Thomas!! I loved your ending…as well your tale equally throughout – each and every of your words resonated within me. Beautiful and dark…bravo, Thomas!!
It’s always a pleasure, Joe!
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Good lord mr brown! Firstly massive round of applause on this story! Flows wonderfully , vivid , bright and dark all at the same time and rich in details!! Secondly , this made me think of the Abbys around the Glastonbury area and the country side too! It is one of my favourite parts of the U.K. ! 3rd you have a massive fan in are little jazzy bear! Bravo that man! Awdw and the girls!
Ahhh, thank you, awdw! You’re so right; there is something about our abbeys and other older buildings that is so rich and evocative. A great setting for mystery and dark deeds… Thanks for stopping by and reading, makes it all worthwhile.
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Mr brown , the pleasure is all mine! Lol . Being blonde I have only just worked out you are uk based, and only up the road a bit ! (Well Oxfordshire is kinda close to surrey!) do you use Oxford for inspiration ? I adore that city and the university life in it! Much to my mother horror I went to goldsmith instead of Oxford! But I do love it so! Awdw X
There was so much in this story, Thomas!! It felt like there was so much left unspoken or eluded to! The tale was one that I read and read again before I could leave a comment.
Fantastic good sir!
Cheers, Mr. Kullis!
I really enjoyed this one, Thomas! You managed (as always!) to conjure up such vivid, magnificent and dark images while spinning them together to tell a great story! Well done, sir!
Glad it resonated, Jon!
Very well written. Usually tales of the Sins are rather dull and are quick to put the reader to sleep. Good job with the suspense and a crashing good ending.
Thanks, I’m really glad you enjoyed the read!
Wonderfully written. This was a great read to start my day!
Thank you, Hunter. Hope your own writing is going well!